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Oh yeah! Felt great getting back into my specialty: some great action-packed and oh-crap scenes! It is from this point on when the story starts to take a much sadder, darker tone, truths shall begin to unfold for all characters, and the true meaning of 'when the tables have turned' comes full force. I hope you can't wait. The next chapter is already ready, and the one after that is my fave so far as it introduces a new main character. Prepare yourselves.
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Alrighty then guys, I hope you liked this chapter.
xXThanks for reading!Xx ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ STORY SUMMARY One hero, one mansion, one villain: one predator, one prison, one prey. However, it becomes frightfully clear that roles are not set in stone and, evidently, the tables can be turned. Rayman is trying to find a way to bring his lost friend back, but ends up in a very un-heroic situation. But the question is, can a spirited Rayman deal with this change...and not break? Based in Rayman 3, but a cross of several RM games. - - - - - - - - - - - My fanfiction account can be found here: [link]
OOOHHH SHAP!!!!! Oh my gosh things just got serious!!! THISISSOEEEEPPPIICCCC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws hands in the air* WEEEEE!!!!! this is a rollercoster and we just did a flip!!!!
Please tell me the "prEy tell" was on purpose - it just seems so in place, said by a Hunter. And heck, Rayman, go easy on him - you have no idea what poor guy's going through and your bruises aren't helping.
Nice job with the descriptions - I love how vivid the situations are
this is a rollercoster and we just did a flip!!!!
now lets hope i dont puke
And heck, Rayman, go easy on him - you have no idea what poor guy's going through and your bruises aren't helping.
A really touching scene with Razoff happens next. ^^
And hug the author beforehand.