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COMMENT PLEASE! Especially if you fave, in literature comments mean a lot more...so please do. Thank you all so much.

Previous chapter/ CHAPTER 12: [link]
For the next chapters please go to my gallery folder of this story. ^^

Some character development and mystery have been the main reason for this chapter and the past two--now that's finished. :) Oh dear, something tells me Razoff is going to be incredibly nasty in the next chapter. ;) After the next chapter, that is when the plot thickens and things start to escalate. I hope you are ready for this.

COPYRIGHT: This story is obviously written by me and so belongs to me, thank you. Plot belongs to me. No one is allowed to copy, use my ideas or work, alter my written work at all--FULL STOP! Please, if you see this anywhere that is not my account under my name or on Fanfiction under my same username, then it is STOLEN! Report it to me immediately!

Rayman, Razoff, Polokus and all the Nymphs and the locations are copyrighted to Ubisoft--I own nothing but the plot, Hope and Faith the Goddesses of the Twin Moons, VINCENT and BOW! Yes, Hope and Faith, Vincent and Bow belong to me! No one is allowed to use him/her/them ANYWHERE without my permission. Or if you draw him/her/them you have to put this story title in the description and also my username--for he/she/then is/are mine. ^^



Comments on what you thought would be amazing, thank you. ^^

Alrighty then guys, I hope you liked this chapter.

xXThanks for reading!Xx
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STORY SUMMARY
One hero, one mansion, one villain: one predator, one prison, one prey. However, it becomes frightfully clear that roles are not set in stone and, evidently, the tables can be turned. Rayman is trying to find a way to bring his lost friend back, but ends up in a very un-heroic situation. But the question is, can a spirited Rayman deal with this change...and not break? 
Based in Rayman 3, but a cross of several RM games.

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Mood: Love ~ShadowsLittleAngel May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omg how? HOW? I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!
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~picachuyou Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IM SO SORRY I HAVN'T BEEN RESPONDING TO RAYMANNNNN!!! D:

I have a lack of the internet so ive been stuck on fanfic.net unable to respond! i am reading them but im stuck with fanfiction.net im sooo sorryyy!!! im going to find some way.... sorry i cant respond to your storys i snuck on the net but i will not have acess for a while. i am reading them on fanfic though :D they are so wonderfully written! it makes me so sad this will be my last commment for a while. im sorry! but i love your work and i approve of it all! i love how the once one D charcters from the video game * cough cough razoff cough cough*
I LOVVVEEE ITTT!! if i could i would hug you but for now, :hug: Thank you for understanding!

I LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYY!!!!
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Mood: Love ~Sonicgirl582 Jan 25, 2013   General Artist
Please do leave reviews on the FF.net version then instead. ^^ It highly needs it. Even this comment as a review would be fantastic! :hug:

Anyway, I understand, thanks so much and I am thrilled that you love it so much! :squee:
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~picachuyou Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for understanding

although I regret to inform you that I can comment. my phone is a small flip phone that gets little internet. But I did read up to your most current on FF.net and cliffhanger!!!!

:( I love it so much!!
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Mood: Love ~Sonicgirl582 Jan 27, 2013   General Artist
Okay, but do leave a comment on Chapter 14 here on DA when you are able to, it would mean a lot. ^^ Thanks a bunch. :heart:
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~picachuyou Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i will!
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~Shade2903 Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahwshum!! Your writing style is fantastic - keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
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Mood: Love ~Sonicgirl582 Jan 15, 2013   General Artist
Awww, thank you! If I'm lucky I will actually get the update on tonight! May not, but could do. :)
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~Shade2903 Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the update? you mean...THERE'S MORE??
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Mood: Love ~Sonicgirl582 Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
Yep! And I finally uploaded it. XD I really enjoyed writing it, and I hope you enjoy reading it. :heart:
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